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Pleasures of Her Sway

As chandeliers drip ‘round the hall Bouquets' scent wafts through night’s affair. In gown of lace she sways with flair Until her man bows ,to enthrall A glide of waltz into soft flight, Where other pairs hope to find bliss On firefly steps, perhaps a kiss That her arms fling to breath’s delight. In whirling turns, she lifts in style And a roulette from dancing guests Enchants the tunes of pleasure’s zest While coy romance drifts and beguiles. The violin presses a hum As her glossed eyes casts on his face, Igniting dipped waists to succumb Within the fling of an embrace. Ballroom Delights Contest 12/1/2014

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:33:00 PM
NETTE, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:09:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win for your lovely ballroom delights poem! I loved the imagery and rhythm. Sandra
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Nette, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:38:00 PM
I love your use of this form. It adds to the beauty of your enchanting poem. Congratulations on your win Nette
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:01:00 PM
A powerful one here nette, I am so happy to see this atop;congrats on the win ...huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:50:00 PM
powerful pen dear pal
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:19:00 AM
Enchanting write! Your words glide across the page in their own elegant dance.
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Date: 12/1/2014 5:40:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:01:00 PM
Lovely dance nette! Always, Keith :-)
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Date: 12/1/2014 3:21:00 PM
Enchanting, Nette! A sure winner...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:11:00 PM
WOW..One of the most beautiful Ballroom Delights poems-Favouring it!Charma
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:51:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic poems Nette :) - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:38:00 PM
My heart pulsates with your rhythmic beat. Elegant in its implied passion of a dance, Nette. A poet at her best!
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:14:00 PM
Such a pleasure indeed! It now makes me feel like dancing! :o)
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:12:00 PM
Nette.... love the romance in this delightful piece... You waltzed with finesse! Hugs
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:02:00 PM
I wish I could dance like this . . . I have two left feet but I holding on tight to twists and turns in this outstanding poem. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:09:00 PM
Stunning imagery as ever Nette:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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