Pleasure

Red Holly berries do adorn Waxy, green Holly Bush On this still, cloudy, quiet day Pleasure for winter's hush The pale pink running rose's leaves now Sparse and yellow, most limbs Abundant with thorns shown in winter White winter filled with hymns Unfinished

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Robin Davis

Date: 7/12/2014 10:04:00 AM

Sara Such amazing imagery and description that allows the reader to actually see and smell all this wonderful nature Thank you for the nice comment on my Hawaii poem

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/18/2013 3:58:00 PM

And you did hymns in the Images you put out There Sara; always good to visit your writes.."

Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2013 3:20:00 PM

love this, my friend - I can visualise these holly and rose bushes

David Scott

Date: 1/11/2013 4:26:00 PM

THANKYOU FOR COMMENTS ON MINE LIKE THIS WRITE THE PATTERN REMINDS ME OF MY SEASONS i LOVE AND WINTER BLUES XX DAVIDSCOTT

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/11/2013 3:01:00 PM

This is quite the incredible start to an awesome poem! I can already visualize exactly what you described here within this elaborate write! Especially the rose bush, that's exactly the way it seems in the winter! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/11/2013 10:42:00 AM

Absolutely love evergreens...I miss my holly trees from the old house place. A beautiful dash of red and green in the middle of winter always reminds me Spring will return.