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Do you remember that first moment when the world came to meet us in the grandest way? It was pure joy that was felt in that splendid ere long under the sun’s ray. New contentment within was the expression found. The experience was deep with a heart swelling somewhat tentative no less profound. Grab it and hold on to it keep it in the front of our minds. When time travels on we all eventually encounter a stumble in our strides. But that first true thought will give us the strength the grit to continue on. It is the bridge that will help us cross the deep rivers where our paths sometimes leads us upon. Do you remember the day when you found the courage to live the life you dreamed? A space you had carved out under spirits light where you felt redeemed. The creation realized came from your own inner thew. It wasn’t from another’s light but a discovered inner delight and away you flew.

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Date: 9/6/2012 9:55:00 AM
What a wonderful posiitive poem Gale, love the bridge over rivers deep, you have a very english name, i had a great etc grandmother born 1700 with your surname.
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Gale Greenwood
Date: 9/6/2012 10:08:00 AM
Harry, Very kind of you to take the time to comment. I have been so busy this week, but hopeful to have a chance to get on the site today. Thank you and have a fantastic day.
Date: 9/4/2012 11:24:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thanks for the comment. You know the name thing happens all of the time. Sometimes it bugs sometimes it doesn't. I do enjoy this site and have read several incredible poems by other members as well as non members alike. I try to get to several, but some days are busier than others. You have a beautiful day. Thanks again.
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:16:00 AM
Sorry I mispelledyour name Gale.
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Gail. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 09/04/2012
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