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Poetry It is our dreams and failures, It sounds like the rain and thunder, It looks like the calm before the storm, It feels like a never-ending rollercoaster, It makes me feel sick. thanks to Karen O'Leary for her great writing exercise.

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Date: 4/7/2009 10:43:00 PM
cong on the boogie man my friend,and so true about poetry,it is a roller coaster of emotions-great
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:02:00 PM
Love this..I often feel "sick" after posting something. Well done. BG
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:04:00 PM
I completely agree, Pawlu, vivid poem! Jim
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:49:00 PM
Poetry does, indeed, generate many feelings like the ones you describe so well here, Pawlu! Poems can make us laugh and cry, just as much as any art form. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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