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Please Hold Me

Please hold me, please embrace my hurting soul, Please hold me, I want to make our bodies one, Please hold me, For I ache for your loving arms around my waist, Please hold me, I am empty inside, I urn for your compassion, Please hold me, you are my soul mate, we belong together as one. Please hold me, come to my side, let me see that passionate look in your eyes, Please let me show you my secret side that I hide deep down awy from the world, Please hold me, I want to get carried away, let our love for each other show, What I am saying to you, I feel like dying, Will you please make love to me? Embracing each other, showing , expressing our passion as husband, wife, is something that we share in private, no secrets, nothing to hide, we bore two children out of love, it would be sad if we lost that same love for each other, for I am in nned of Your love, caring, sweet side, that I fell in love with twenty three years ago, but the choice is yours...

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Date: 8/29/2015 2:42:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, this is such a sad piece! We all need the love and support of our partners. If this is about you, it sounds to me that there is a lack of good communication here and you really have to have a conversation with your husband and come to some kind of mutual understanding. Otherwise you will continue to be unhappy! While this situation is really sad, this is an excellent piece and deserves a 7! Pandita
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