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Please Help Me

Please help me! No one loves me I need a shoulder I need to cry on you! Please help me! I am alone today I don't know what to do And nobody loves me Please help me Please rescue me Please be with me I got no one you see Help! Help me! Please, please me! There's no place to grow And I got no place to go Life sucks! Yes, you hear me right Everything is black or white And often I'm losing sight They think me dumb and never bright I'm trapped against four walls And my world is gettin' so small Therefore I need a white knight Someone to take me right thru the night! I am in so much pain I only feel the rain Life sucks! You hear me right Everything is black or white Please help me! Someone help me Someone listen to me I am in pain today I look at me And I look at you I'll be okay they say But it's hard for me to see There's no place to grow There's no place to go I got no love to show And life is so filled of woes Please help me! Anyone please help me I need your shoulder So I can cry on you Please help me! Anyone please help me. Authors note: Yes this is the cry I hear in my heart, mind and soul, everyday from thousands, wait, I mean perhaps millions of teens in this sad world of ours. This heart wrenching cry is not just from girls but boys too. It really breaks my heart to know this. So many kids are growing without love and real attention and care and some right in their homes. Please give all your love, understanding, support and yes respect too, to kids and teens. We have to start with our own children or someone's kids we know. Our youth needs it so much especially in these decaying days and times. They’re our hope and future no matter what. Thank you and God bless you all for it! Dorian

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Date: 11/13/2008 7:01:00 AM
Heart wrenching verse. I am sad to think this is true for many teens. I've got 2 (a boy and a girl); it's often difficult wending my way through parenting them as they are suddenly faced with many issues they've never encountered before. Thx for the write.
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Date: 11/5/2008 9:22:00 PM
very emotional......i agree life does suck!....well thought poem
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Date: 11/4/2008 10:28:00 AM
Dorian, This poem is overflowing with anguish and pain. By reading the poem I could hear the cry myself. Hands that could wipe the tears are busy amassing wealth for themselves. Lot of donations from you and I end up in the pockets of stinking rich. May be such writings can compel poeple to soul searching. Thanks for your lavish praise of my poem The Paint Brush.
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:23:00 PM
The reality of your write, as referred to in your note, is absolutely heartbreaking. Wish I could help and adopt everyone, if truth be known. I cannot bear to see a child suffer. So emotional. So sad. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:18:00 PM
This is a very sad write, but all so true. Millions are alone, and feel as if no one really cares. Blessings to you, and yours, Always, Christy
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Date: 10/29/2008 2:36:00 PM
This poem is outstanding, filled with emotion, I agree so many children, young adults are adrift, trapped, you expressed it so well.. Constance
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