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Please Have Intercourse With Me

Getting your attention I am sure Right now we are having Intercourse Some fear this word in conversation Hidden for lack of education Man has perverted this word Placing sex above conversation If I were to walk up to any women and say I think you are very pretty may we have intercourse What would her first thought’s be This simple example may open your eyes To how man has complicated communication We take our evil thought’s and pervert our words We over use our words this waters them down Love has lost love and hate has gained Gay no longer means happy We change our meanings to our words So how can we understand or have Intercourse when we mix up our words This may sound silly and not to important look around we all have been separated From lack of Intercourse

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/7/2019 10:46:00 AM

Hello Bobby May,well this quit a poem.Your right gay does not mean happy.I agree with Jimmi Canada. your words are honest. Have a nice day my friend.

Jimmi Canada

Date: 3/3/2019 12:54:00 PM

I think the titles deep, and some of your phrasing really honest. It's the only way.

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/25/2019 7:34:00 AM

I saw and knew the definition of the word and knew which way you intended. Very clever title and fine poetry my friend. Congratulations on POTD being awarded your creation! A fav..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2019 10:55:00 AM

Hey, Bobby, I think that the title got you over the hump. LOL. Congrats on this honor, my friend! :) gw

Bobby May
Date: 2/24/2019 11:02:00 AM

LOL, Gershon to funny

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/23/2019 8:28:00 AM

Hi Bobby, dropping by with belated congratulation your well-deserved Poem Of the Day. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/23/2019 6:53:00 AM

Such a great thought-provoking write! Congrats on POTD!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/21/2019 5:31:00 PM

So true Bobby. My mind immediately went to conversation tho' LOL. That tells a lot about where I am right now in my life I guess. I do agree that changing our words over the years is confusing. Like when they say something is bad, meaning good. Surely they can come up with another word to mean good, the younger generation I mean. Congratulations on having your excellent poem honored with POTD! : ) xxoo

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/21/2019 5:12:00 PM

Back with POTD congrats :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2019 3:16:00 PM

Very good, Bobby, in·ter·courseDictionary result for intercourse /'in(t)?r?kôrs/Submit noun communication or dealings between individuals or groups. "everyday social intercourse"........... Congratulations on POTD.. I will always communicate with you dear friend.. :)

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 4:13:00 PM

Always Eve we are soup buddies! Thank you!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/21/2019 1:06:00 PM

Yes Bobby. You sound like you are near my generation so like me you have seen a lot of things change in our lifetime. Language is no exception. At some point it has gotten just a little overwhelming. Great write! Congratulations on POTD.

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 4:12:00 PM

Thank You Daniel and sad to say we are most likely in the same generation my friend but on the bright side we know what intercourse is, lol

Charles Messina

Date: 2/21/2019 11:08:00 AM

Great poem, Bobby. Congratulations on POTD!

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thank You Charles!!

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 2/21/2019 9:45:00 AM

An example a good poem if not satirical. Congratulations Bobby.

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 9:47:00 AM

Than You Okonkwo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/21/2019 7:55:00 AM

A fabulous rabbit hole of a poem! Great write Bobby, congratulations on POTD! xomo

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 9:12:00 AM

That means a lot coming from you Maureen, Thank You my friend!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2019 7:45:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 9:11:00 AM

Thank You Alexis once again! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2019 7:04:00 AM

- A thoughtful write, Bobby - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 9:10:00 AM

Thank You Anne-Lise

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/21/2019 5:49:00 AM

Of course...intercourse lol... you're a great educator Bobby...your right on course!... Congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 9:10:00 AM

LOL W.W. Thank you for the complement! Love back at you

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2019 1:47:00 AM

Thought provoking verse Bobby, I notice sometimes an innocent word in your country could be offensive in another. Congratulations on POTD. Tom.

Bobby May
Date: 2/21/2019 2:11:00 AM

Thank You Tom, words have meaning and people use them to lightly as if they were toys, A surprise for sure to me this morning

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/19/2019 10:01:00 AM

Wah!! What a poem!!! Truly, truly an educating one :) and yeah I'ld love to have intercourse with intellectuals like you :)

Bobby May
Date: 2/19/2019 10:40:00 AM

Swetha thank you very much for the complement my friend!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/19/2019 7:55:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I'm with P.S., the title grabbed my attention initially. Once I started to read I was no longer shocked, I got educated. I had no clue the word meant anything but the obvious .With that being said I would love to have intercourse with you. Well done:-) Alexis

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/19/2019 6:54:00 AM

I know right! What words will be left? And yes the title shocked me and then you reminded me of the actual meaning of the word. Very well written and the message is “food for thought.”