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Please Give Input This Is For a Friend

she mastered her destiny, implementing thoughts of the perfect recipe. Crafted with a careful eye, her goals will not be denied. She breathed the gift of life, and marveled at its presence, in the creation lies her essence, style blended with grace, like a goddess who wields her title effortlessly, what more can you expect from the creator of salon destiny..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 10:18:00 PM

Anthony Bell, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 7:15:00 PM

ANTHONY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*

P Sheart

Date: 5/21/2009 12:09:00 PM

Hi Anthony I echo Shars comments. Each single line within my own writing conveys a single thought when I'm writing. It seems to work for me although I've had no poetic training, I just write from the heart. This is a beautiful poem. Truly enjoyed reading it! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/21/2009 8:25:00 AM

I would simply write in verse style instead of paragraph. For example wherever you have a comma and a period, just make it a new line instead. It's pretty great other than the form it is in. It will be easier to read this way. Try it and see how it works! Good luck. Love, Shar