Please Fix This

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Questionku is a new short form by Richard Lamoureux. By definition it consists of three lines:

Line one: 4 syllables.

Line 2: 5 syllables.

Line 3: A 6-syllable question. (www.poetrysoup.com)

right before sleep always comes the thought please God, will you help us not one question only angry words how could you both do that sisters forever never together I live with it, can you praying for us as I fall asleep please God, will you fix this

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James Inman

Date: 4/2/2020 10:58:00 AM

Great use of the form, but more important, deep meaningful thoughts.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2015 8:01:00 AM

I'm pleased you tried my form. If you remove the capitalization and the question marks it will be more ku like. If you have a chance check out my web site www.wisedummypoet.com.

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/26/2015 8:14:00 PM

Thank you for reading and suggestions. I certainly will and will edit.

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/14/2015 7:33:00 PM

never heard of a family that didn't fight....me and my brother used to be at it all night....but what I learned as I have Lived longer....all the fights do is make us stronger....;)

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/14/2015 8:59:00 PM

Thank you. Time will tell I suppose. Either way, it will be. I appreciate you taking time to read this and share. ~ Susan