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Please Don'T Say Bye Bye Becca

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Becca Teagan I’ve heard that you’re leaving My stomach is now churning and heaving Salty tears start to flow I don’t want you to go You are loved here and now I am grieving Dear Becca you are part of this group Just take a break from poetry soup So please take a rest Then come back refreshed And the souper’s will be cock a hoop! Written for Bye Bye Becca Contest Sponsored by Jerry T Curtis

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/17/2016 9:51:00 PM

She is part of this group, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2016 2:57:00 AM

Thanks Eve I hope she stays:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/17/2016 12:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/17/2016 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-)hugs Jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/1/2016 7:45:00 PM

I agree not to say goodbye to Becca as well, just know Becca you be dearly missed and see you when you return, take care until then XO. Beautiful write Jan. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/17/2016 5:54:00 PM

I hope she stays on soup Cecilia:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/24/2016 7:14:00 AM

This should make her stay:) great encouraging write, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/25/2016 5:51:00 PM

I hope she does stay Jo - there are too many lovely people who just disappear:-( hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/22/2016 2:04:00 PM

Until the contest I didn't know she was leaving... Good poem for her to read.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/25/2016 5:50:00 PM

Nor did I:-( Thanks for your comment Carol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/20/2016 11:03:00 AM

I did not know that Becca had left, but having read your limerick appeal I am sure she would be tempted to change her mind! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2016 11:42:00 AM

All I know is that Jerry has done a contest and I had to write to encourage her to stay:-) hugs Jan xx

Augustus Black

Date: 9/19/2016 11:11:00 PM

Just lovely poem, filled with a great sadness. Yaa! It really feels very sad when someone goes. All the best for the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2016 6:21:00 AM

Thanks Augastus:-)I hope she changes her mind it would be very sad to lose her from the soup community:-( hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/18/2016 6:35:00 PM

a very well-written plea, jan! it's always sad when favorite poets leave the soup but it's been happening since i've been here and there's not much we can do about it. maybe this will do the trick...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2016 1:53:00 AM

I've seen it too Ilene and I hope Becca just has a break and doesn't leave:-) hugs Jan xx