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Please Don'T Die

I hoped that there would be more days I hoped there'd be more years But this pain I'm feeling within my heart keeps drawing up these fears This cancer you have wants to take you away I don't want to say goodbye Please Mom, please Mom please don't die I know that you can beat this I know you can somehow I need you here with me I need you here right now I know you can get through this Just fight it, just try Please Mom, please Mom please don't die The life you lived upon this earth was never long enough You have made it through everything till now Cause' you have always been so tough I don't want to have to miss you I don't want to have to cry So, Please Mom, please Mom please don't die By Roger Horsch

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Date: 2/27/2014 8:27:00 AM
Roger Such a sad and painful write. The emotional turmoil in your heart is clearly shown in this heartfelt plea for you mom. Sending good thoughts she is alright. thanks for the nice comment and congrats on my Fancy Flowers poem
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Date: 2/27/2014 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Robin for the visit. It is always wonderful to hear from you......Hugs.....Roger
Date: 1/18/2014 8:31:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear your mom is not well. I hope she is not in to much pain and that your prayer is answered.
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:04:00 PM
First of all I want to thank you for reading my poem and for your heartfelt concern. My mother is not in much pain, but she is still fighting her cancer. She is a strong woman.
Date: 12/19/2013 6:31:00 PM
Oh! Roger, what a beautiful but sad piece, I do hope your mother (as Peter said) wins this battle, I don't know her but please give her my love and best wishes. Vera
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Date: 12/20/2013 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Vera, She is still fighting the battle...Luv....Roger
Date: 12/3/2013 6:25:00 PM
I agree with Andrea, this is heartbreaking, and almost too painful to read. I am sure that this was not an easy subject to write about. Very well done, Roger! I hope your Mom pulled through this...Hugs!
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Date: 12/3/2013 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Kelly, You are too kind. My mother is hanging in there and it was one of the hardest poems I ever had to write.....Hugs...Roger
Date: 11/21/2013 5:42:00 PM
this is heartbreaking. I hope she fought it like you asked her to do. Also I see this won in some contest. Congrats for that.
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Date: 11/22/2013 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I love hearing from you....Roger
Date: 11/8/2013 2:01:00 PM
A well deserved win. Lovely poetry
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Scott
Date: 11/7/2013 10:27:00 PM
Roger, , lovely impressive win................ SKAT:)
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:36:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 11/7/2013 3:35:00 PM
thats amazing words can't describe how thos poem makes me feel congrats on the win
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Anne, This poem I am living. But what is hard to deal with in life, only makes us stronger. Your friend. Roger
Date: 11/7/2013 5:18:00 AM
congrats on your win,
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Kiran, Your friend in poetry. Roger
Date: 11/6/2013 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win bro. BAM! CTB
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Date: 11/6/2013 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Moo for the BAM !
Date: 11/6/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- ROGER --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ Linda
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Date: 11/6/2013 4:09:00 PM
Thanks for the win. I can't wait til your next contest. Roger
Date: 10/31/2013 10:02:00 AM
I wish your heartfelt plea could take away the disease. Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 10/31/2013 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Karen, I wish my plea could take it away also. Your friend in poetry Roger
Date: 10/30/2013 12:12:00 PM
heartfelt.... congrats ....love <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat, Between you and your sister I always look forward to hearing from you both. Roger
Date: 10/28/2013 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Roger
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram for your congrats. It means a lot to me that you took the time to write me. Your friend in poetry. Roger
Date: 10/27/2013 12:25:00 AM
This is a nice and sad poem friend,Congratulation on your win
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for your nice words. Your friend in poetry. Roger
Date: 10/26/2013 9:10:00 PM
Hello Roger, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:27:00 PM
I love this picture of you. Roger
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Date: 10/26/2013 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I can't wait to see how I do In your contest. Just joking. I invite you to read my new poem. It is titled " Cross That Bridge " I will take you up on checking out your latest blog. Til next time Roger
Date: 10/26/2013 9:03:00 PM
such a poignant write...I can relate to the pain in this poem and lost mine to the dreaded "C" word...congrats on your fine win :)
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Date: 10/26/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, It is always nice to hear from you. Your Friend Roger
Date: 10/24/2013 6:43:00 PM
Sad poem Roger, glad you can express your pen this way. I'm the kind of gal who can not express my emotions well on paper, unless Anger is involved. Heartfelt............... LOVE SKAT
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:57:00 AM
I first thank you for your comments about my poem. But I know that if you have any love in your heart you can show your emotions without having to get angry. your friend Roger
Date: 10/23/2013 7:38:00 PM
Roger, a dearly heartfelt poem. much sadness when cancer sticks around the ones we love. Please tell me this is not something you are going through right now. I am deeply moved by your poem. I have a Pink-Tober contest. It's to help support this cause... always and forever...LINDA
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Date: 10/24/2013 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I am going through this with my mother. She,s been fighting her cancer for two years and can not have any more komo. she has one to two more years to live. The poem was how I felt at that time. I find that when you write from your heart you will never run out of things to say. I always love to hear from you Roger. PS Check out my brothers poems on soup. His name is Christopher Thor Britt. He is a very good Writer.
Date: 10/23/2013 2:53:00 PM
Roger, You already know this is a great poem, written with far more than ink, but with tears. I share your tears. Your Brother, Chris
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Roger Horsch
Date: 10/23/2013 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Moo, your bro Roger

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