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~Please Dear Lord~ (Couplet ) Please dear Lord help all those who are in pain Let them see that calling on You is never in vain That reading your Word can give them every day More strengh to carry on and make it through So many people are hurting right now so bad You know Please help them all because Your love for them just flows So many folks are fighting their own demons struggles and depressions They deal with so much more in their daily walk with pain and tensions Assist them to see better,not be blinded by world and all everyday Help them all little and small, rich and poor to find love peace in you Dear Lord give all of my friends,family,brother and sisters in Christ hope Never from them hide Your face,give them all strength with everything to cope So many things out there that can distract and causes much pain in each heart But please dear Lord make all see that You're never far and Your love never part. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.29.2015
~In God I Trust~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2015 1:40:00 PM
Very beautifully written, and expressed.It shows that it comes from the heart . Thank you for sharing your utmost thoughts. I also thank you for your words on my poem. May god bless you and may your pen always flow with love and appreciation for yourself and others. Thank you
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/4/2015 9:43:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Roberto,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it.You're very kind.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
Date: 6/1/2015 1:13:00 PM
A nice prayer for all by a nice heart. Extreme beauty is hidden in your beautiful heart that came out with beautiful words. 7+++, i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 6/2/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it,dear friend.You're very kind!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
Date: 5/29/2015 6:20:00 PM
Plus, I love the beautiful illustrations of Christ, as well! God bless :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:46:00 PM
Happy to know that you love the beautiful pictures of the Lord, Laura:) D.
Date: 5/29/2015 6:19:00 PM
This is a beautiful, heart felt poem of prayer, Dorian! I was very uplifted by it, too. Thanks for blessing us with this lovely write :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Laura,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it.Ah, your more than welcome it is my pleasure Laura.I'll visit you very soon.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
Date: 5/28/2015 9:16:00 PM
Dorian, a beautiful poem. I believe he answered every word on this poem since day one. A blessing to read
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Date: 5/31/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Skat,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it dear friendWell, I'm hoping so bad that he already did :)Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

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