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Please Can I Come In

Streams of emotion flow on And love's breeze blow on Blowing out the intense feelings in me Feelings once calm like the sea. On my heart rushed So many hurdles it crossed Helplessly I ran after it I was soon lost in enchantment street. Where is my heart madly travelling to? Why speedily it travels so? It went over the greatest wall As determined like a waterfall. I tried all I can To void my heart's unkown plan I tried to overtake my heart But it has outran me from the start. Supersonically it sped on Making no backward turn It sped on like a shooting star Its destination no longer far. Abruptly it stopped Before you it halted Urging you up to open Please can I come in?

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