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Please God we need peace on earth to wake each morn with no breaking news on wars, shootings, killings terror 'round the globe and home. Please, we pray for and beg from you that we can love, work, play, live our lives without these dark clouds of dread around us. Sandra M. Haight ~8th Place~ Premiere Contest: Etheree Sponsor: Kim Merryman Judged: 07/26/2016

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Janis Thompson

Date: 7/27/2016 8:01:00 PM

A wonderful modern prayer with a well constructed etheree. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. #7

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2016 7:30:00 PM

Sandra, congrats on your placement in my contest! A beautiful prayer that I'm sure is echoed in all our hearts. Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 3:05:00 PM

a beautiful prayer Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2016 1:21:00 AM

Sandra, your message is a prayer we can all relate to and it is one I can certainly embrace. It is beautiful! You managed to make a perfect pyramid! Congratulations on your placement Sandra! 7 ; )

John Watt

Date: 7/27/2016 12:47:00 AM

Sandra, who else can we turn to but God when all around us seems to be caving in? Thank you for this encouragement to not give in to despair but to turn our anxiety to prayer. Blessings ~ John

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/27/2016 12:10:00 AM

Oh we do wish so Sandra! Congrats on your win, :) Sunita

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/26/2016 11:59:00 PM

....and back to say congratulations, Sandra, well done! Viv x

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/26/2016 9:59:00 PM

That should be on a shared social network sign, Sandra. Congrats!

Lu Loo

Date: 7/26/2016 9:02:00 PM

Sandra, what a touching etheree you have here, back with my congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/24/2016 12:51:00 AM

Amen to that, Sandra, the very best of luck for the contest. Viv x

Lin Lane

Date: 7/23/2016 12:16:00 PM

Hi Sandra. I'm paying a visit to some friends here today and I'm happy to comment on this lovely prayer you've created. It's an ethereal etheree! I hope you're healthy and happy. Hugs to ya.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/23/2016 11:31:00 AM

Hi Sandra, I echo your beautiful and heartfelt prayer. Well done. Good luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 7/23/2016 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful poem x

Barry Stebbings

Date: 7/23/2016 10:57:00 AM

A really lovely prayer, Sandra. Good luck with the contest. Barry