Playing With Fire

My heart is a box and you are the match That is the only analogy of what you’re to me You strike it over and over lighting my Every emotions, passions and feelings. Every time you walk on the road of my house Every time you make me melt I am the pyromaniac, falling in love with you It’s like playing with fire. First love is like playing with fire Aglow with pain and glory. Tell me my dear If I am burnt into your heart For I have learnt if you play with fire You are going to be burnt But playing with fire is worth it The fire distant, pain near.
============================================== Date 20-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Playing with Fire by P.D.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/10/2013 4:28:00 PM
A great description about the flames of passion. Very good work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Dr Ram
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Date: 12/10/2013 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations to you too Doc on your win, Well done Cheers
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Date: 12/9/2013 8:55:00 PM
Nice win Dr. Ram......Thanks for all your comments on my work
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Date: 12/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
Congrats, Dr.! A fiery write.
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:38:00 PM
Dr ram, Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win again. xox.LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2013 4:00:00 PM
I like the opening stanza and three and four and most of 2 except for the second line, does fire melt? the promising cinders of this poem are the ones that decorate the air and my mind.
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Date: 11/22/2013 3:21:00 PM
That is quite a "hot" invitation in your last stanza!! Hope this infatuation doesn't go up in smoke!! :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:33:00 PM
Wonderfully full of passion and emtion perfect loved it cher. and thanks for your congrads for my win. cheri
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:32:00 PM
Wonderfully full of passion and emtion perfect loved it cher. and thanks for your congrads for my win. cheri
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Date: 11/20/2013 11:17:00 AM
Dr, Ram: For some reason this box and match = spark and flame image really penetrated. Strange how little chemical hormones strike so suddenly and with a burst a flame. I never realized I was a pyromaniac.
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:07:00 AM
very nicely penned Dr Ram...
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:51:00 AM
Oh , heart in love, how much by fire to be consumed you yearn than run far away to safety! Beautiful analogy, Dr Ram!
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