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Oh, how I cherish that bright sun! But, she must turn me often lest I grow deformed and stifled in my quest for too much light. And at the faithful window, day by day, that glow appears- my sustenance of life. Instinctively, I lift my leafy palms as if to catch each golden ray and lean to kiss the glass- back arched in thankful prayer. And she, like God, keeps turning me around to make me straight, aware that I must work to find the light once more. An endless fight, this turning, turning, cutting short my time to fully drink of sun. And what despair for me to face again the shadowed room- to gather strength- confront the task at hand: my twisting, writhing, standing tall, erect- then leaning, reaching out for light again. And yet, I grow in beauty, health, and grace. The secret lies in proper tension kept between her God-like care to keep me straight- and my strong will to seek and worship sun. February 10, 2015 ~3rd Place~ Contest: I Drew A Blank Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 06/02/2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: Structured Forms-Iambic Verse: Sponsor: Giorgio, A.V. Judged: 02/23/2015

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Date: 6/4/2016 3:10:00 AM
Intricately constructed, I love the concept of molding and shaping a life. Masterful. Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Dineen, for your visit, congratulations and positive comment. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 6/3/2016 2:53:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful poem, Sandra! Great job :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/3/2016 8:09:00 AM
Wow, impressive write, marvelous analogy and perfect blank verse. a favorite of mine of yours, Sandra. Congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, Reason, for you visit, congrats and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/2/2016 10:39:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/2/2016 9:53:00 PM
Sandra, this one got me from the title on through. Woven through with mystical metaphor, tinged with the constancy of love's labor, imbued with the passion of the poetess. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/4/2016 9:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for another great contest, and for my awesome placement. Blank verse is one of my favorite forms, and I am so pleased that you found it worthy. Sandra
Date: 2/27/2015 10:36:00 PM
Sandra, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:11:00 PM
Well done Sandra, interesting topic well written and structured, congratulations.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 8:53:00 PM
Hi Robert, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem. I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 2/24/2015 3:17:00 PM
I loved this the first time i read it Sandra - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I always appreciate your nice comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/24/2015 1:26:00 AM
Masterful write Sandra n a very deserved top place win! Big congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 8:54:00 PM
Once again, Dr. Upma, I so appreciate your encouraging comment and congratulations. Thank you! Sandra
Date: 2/10/2015 4:11:00 PM
The Amaryllis is just looking at the snow Sandra and pleased she is in the warmth of the house - delightful personification - good luck in the contest - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 4:51:00 PM
The allegory shines through Sandra: I Guess I am a little warped and bent at the moment - one day i may eventually turn to the light:-(:-( Hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/10/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your support so much. Yes...also, it is kind of what God does to us...constantly turning us in life to become strong and to keep us straight. I hope the allegory comes through. Hugs, Sandra

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