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Playful Sobs of Lullaby

Mournful silence in which they cry. The union that has left them cold. The remnants of a lie that sold. Did we head into this deal blind? Can we say we weren’t of right mind? Broken, crumpled; before your eyes. Collateral to your self –demise. All the things you did not see. Until they forced a mirror to thee. Did we think of one another? Can we say we that you’re my lover? No answer? Nothing left to say? I’m sorry my dear. This time I didn’t come back. I’m sorry. Please hear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2015 12:32:00 PM
many congrats on your win Lauren - so heartbreaking a poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:10:00 AM
Heartbreaking write... well scripted. Congrats on your placement in the contest !!
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Lauren Knight
Date: 2/22/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thank you I really appreciate all the kind words everyone has said, it is a real confidence boost, so thank you to everyone and thank you Debra!
Date: 2/21/2015 10:25:00 PM
Lauren, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Lauren Knight
Date: 2/22/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/21/2015 8:59:00 PM
lovely win Lauren..PD
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Date: 2/21/2015 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations great write
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Date: 2/21/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats.
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Lauren Knight
Date: 2/21/2015 2:42:00 PM
Thank you!

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