Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Playful Dawn

Sara Kendrick | + Follow Poet |

Playful Dawn

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.

Image result for pictures of the crack of dawn

"The sounds of Earth is the music of my soul." Upon the horizon, playful dawn cracked Dressed in her iridescent rose ball gown An upturned smile, never a downcast frown As soft wind touched wind chimes 'pon her barebacked Baying hounds' continuous barks sorely racked Poet's thoughts and varmint which they ransacked Upon the horizon, playful dawn cracked Dressed in her iridescent rose ball gown Casting shadows upon gray clouds which lacked Songs to brighten the day with a gold crown. Doves on the hill or valley way down Coo to dawn with a song which gray clouds lacked. Upon the horizon, playful dawn cracked This is a Rondel. It is not listed on here. I hope this is okay. Date: 8/4/22 Contest: Let Your Muse Be Inspired-R Form Sponsor: Constance La France # syllables per line 10, checked with SyllableCounter.net

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2022 11:54:00 PM

Sara, nice Roundel poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, love the image too, God Bless ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2022 4:52:00 AM

Constance, Thanks for letting me know about my placing in your contest. I appreciate you stopping by and saying it is nice. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/3/2022 1:34:00 AM

A beautiful poem Sara, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2022 2:32:00 AM

Belle, Thank you for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/6/2022 5:44:00 AM

Sara, this is such visually satisfying poetry, and it also has a wonderfully calming effect. I hope you have success in the contest. Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/6/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto. I need all the blessings I can get. Your visits are delightful. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/5/2022 1:35:00 AM

This poem is so soothing. Loved it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/5/2022 2:03:00 AM

Thanks for the second visit. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/4/2022 11:03:00 AM

Sara, this is so visually filling like eating desert before breakfast. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2022 12:17:00 PM

Great, Sam. I need to read some that are filling instead of breakfast. Thanks for the visit and leaving such a nice comment. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/4/2022 8:04:00 AM

This is beautiful Sara. I enjoyed this peaceful poem :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2022 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. I am glad it was peaceful in this time where so many things in life aren't. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/4/2022 7:59:00 AM

Soft and soothing. I love the tenor of your poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2022 12:11:00 PM

Why, thank you, Victor. I believe it might sing tenor. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/4/2022 7:04:00 AM

Enjoyed the sounds of earth you convey, Sara. I liked the rhythm of repeating line. Best to you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2022 8:47:00 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the well wishes. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/4/2022 7:00:00 AM

Beautiful imagery that paints a serene picture. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2022 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Paulette. I appreciate the encouraging words. Sara