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Played the Violin

I played the violin today yeah i did it again Sticks and stones they break your bones but your words broke skin Don't act like you would care I'm tired of your lies it's too much to bear so start saying goodbye Close to finishing the song what happens when i'm done? would you care to sing along or would you miss me when i'm gone No don't even pretend you were never there for me all i needed was a friend you didn't care enough to see (5-7-14) AT

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 11:01:00 PM

Alissa, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 1:57:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alissa - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)