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planting you a rose the seed in my mind awaiting the explosion bang on beautiful dazzling pretty a fusion of flowers lighting up my vision like all the colours upon a rainbow budding to a beautiful flower raising amongst the daisies towering tall among'st the flowers as the sun smiles on you brightening up the garden with flowers of all colours the one colour that stands out my rose i behold you a fragrant beauty standing tall one flower the flower i do adore stands out in you

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Date: 9/5/2013 8:44:00 AM
What a stunningly romantic and uplifting poem. Love the way you combine nature with doting love.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 5:16:00 PM
THE NICEST WAY TO PAINT WITH WORDS IS WITH EVERYTHING NATURE HAS TO OFFER THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/5/2013 4:15:00 AM
Goodmorning Mr gardener..You made a blooming rose out of a simple daisy..Just beautiful
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 6:24:00 AM
PLANTED BEAUTIFUL BLOOMING A ROSE YOUR COMMENT GOOD MORNING CHARMA
Date: 9/4/2013 5:15:00 PM
What a beautiful garden you must grow! The imagery is just fabulous and fragrant in this piece. This was so well written, making it a very enjoyable and peaceful poem to read!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/4/2013 5:46:00 PM
you tickled me good i smiled at such a beautiful comment deeply appreciated

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