Planetary Alignment

a planetary alignment parallel worlds

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/4/2022 3:22:00 PM

This brings to mind so many awakenings . I love the thought. Beautiful Haiku M.L. Susan :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/23/2022 11:10:00 PM

A bright great haiku! Kudos! ^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/5/2022 6:07:00 PM

This does make me ponder. I have wondered about a parallel world, or actually even the earth in another dimension where evil doesn't reign. I really enjoyed this.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/28/2022 11:26:00 PM

I like this very much. I have heard we have a sister planet very close by that we can’t see. Possibly in a higher dimension or perhaps at another vibrational level that keeps us from viewing it. I enjoyed your haiku. Blessings xxoo

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/15/2022 7:46:00 AM

Interesting. One to make one think.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/14/2022 1:36:00 AM

Yet still very unknown, so sorry we won't know too much about our galaxy and planets in our lifetime. Hugs and blessings from me MLK and from all the planets you write about, hope you receive the accolades you deserve for they know you are watching them. Jennifer.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/13/2022 12:18:00 PM

M.L., your ultra-concise haiku really has a lot to say! Janice