Plane

a low flying plane noisy engine .... poet's thoughts scattered

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John Freeman

Date: 4/5/2014 2:04:00 PM

Nice to hear your smiling face again Sara, your poem too. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2014 1:41:00 AM

hey, this is really good. the juxtaposition, though not concrete, is really GREAT.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/2/2014 6:26:00 AM

Yes, those thoughts would not be concrete but free floating, breezy, and hard to contain..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/1/2014 6:13:00 AM

Yes loud noises can surely distract any train of thought...especially if it's a good one! I love what you have done here, a very awesome poem my friend! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 3:28:00 PM

yes, so true - I can picture this exactly

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/31/2014 12:09:00 PM

Mrs. Kendrick, does it feel like a bowling ball rolled a strike! Get out the rake, theirs work to be done.~~~have a peaceful day.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/2/2014 6:27:00 AM

Those thoughts are spread around so far that I would have to get the hay rake..Sara