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Placed Saucer

Breaking through day, the last night, where the mirror on glass lips posed for a new moon, that only masked its face in ebony brims of space trapping in my ache, with cedar pandoras making the bleakest of songs; a viridescent heart— under sylvan skin; back to sun's cloned moon; her moody phases cut you, while salt gives the macadam a required taste— alone, with an empiricism of waste; but in a candle's whiffs, the flames— round and round in my head— afer an evening's quivering prayers, fixated on poppies in morning— breaking through day.

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Date: 9/22/2023 7:07:00 AM
This is deeply emotive, I know a person like this.. You expressed it with feeling and your words are relatable..
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Date: 9/20/2023 10:37:00 PM
What a deep and intriguing write this is, you’ve expressed yourself so well here dear beautiful poetess, i especially loved the line “a new moon that masked its face in ebony” whoa. “ her moody phases cut you” the moon does resemble some of our moodswings too their change in phase etc. a brilliant write this is! You are an exquisite word weaver
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