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Winds whisper in the dark of night Night trembles with the lonely sounds Sounds of weeping comes from shadows; Shadows steeped in years of grieving
_________________________________ For Nette's Contest: Four Lines Only By Carrie Richards 6/6/15 Visual #3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/12/2015 7:46:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2015 6:15:00 PM
Love the imagery, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
yes, another one about the grave yard.This picture is the best one to use for making a good poem, in my opinion. And you have not proved me wrong.
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Date: 6/7/2015 6:00:00 PM
Wow another brilliant verse, loved this too Carrie. GL
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Date: 6/7/2015 8:32:00 AM
Good one Carrie as usual...and if I keep sending you the same comment...it's only because it's true....of you....
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Date: 6/7/2015 6:46:00 AM
A little spooky with a touch of humour Carrie:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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