Pity

To understand the mystery Is to overstand the jury For pain traverses the sane While they diverse through the insane Real and proper No steel and copper Their love is for money Not harmony We believe in a being Yet our souls are like spring They wind each day Easy to waylay Yet we claim we shall overcome But we dont know how far we've come For us pretty, It's a pity

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2013 5:15:00 PM

Teddy, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda

Skat A

Date: 10/5/2013 8:39:00 PM

interesting poem......... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:49:00 PM

Teddy, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2013 7:15:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/24/2013 5:17:00 PM

Insightful!

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2013 2:24:00 PM

Teddy, wow , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2013 10:19:00 AM

Hello Teddy, i like the line and thought ----> Yet our souls are like spring They wind each day. Enjoyed , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2013 10:03:00 AM

Hello new member Teddy !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)