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Pit of Despair

Sometimes, life can seem unfair, as your heart loses all hope. And from a pit of despair, you struggle merely to cope. Love is an elusive dream, interlaced with nightmare thoughts. And anxiety's extreme, tying your stomach in knots. You try to rewind life's tape, and yet, it is stuck on pause. And there's no way to escape the suffering; or its cause. Abuse morphs into self-hate, guiding the knife on its path. And admonishing your fate, you let its blade purge your wrath. Every cut exacts a toll, unleashing a scarlet flood. And yet, the pain in your soul is numbed; by the flow of blood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 3:45:00 PM
Great lines "You try to rewind life's tape but you find it's stuck on pause."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/22/2015 5:20:00 PM
Merry Christmas Emile... a nice flow in this poem using a topic that appears more and more prevalent in modern society - thank you Emile - Lindsay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/22/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.
Date: 12/11/2015 2:13:00 PM
Hi Emile. I liked the rhythm. The story is good too. Lately I find more bad times in life than good. You can't look for the happy times. You have to make the happy times. Hope you write more. I like your style to this.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/11/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Trevor, I appreciate your insightful comments. Emile.

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