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Pisces

Shallow as puddles in a rushing rain I'd rather not be Water~ trickling, pouring Cleansing. I'd rather be... I am the fish that swims Struggling. Water is in me. Still as stones in a raging river I'd rather not be Water~ bubbling, flowing Refreshing. I'd rather be... I am the fish that swims Alive. Water is in me. Dull as debris in an opaline ocean I'd rather not be Water~ rising, ebbing Changing. I'd rather be... I am the fish that swims Free. Water is in me.

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

lol, enjoyed another of your golden oldies, nikko. sue, my wife, is a piscean and liked this one a lot too.

De R

Date: 5/9/2011 4:56:00 AM

Hehe..gotta love this..we, Pisces, are really cool, you know?:))You gotta admit that:)) `I am the fish that swims Free. Water is in me.` loved this one. Think I'm going to fav this! See ya later, sweetie! And coming back tomorrow:P

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2010 9:49:00 PM

Just rereading this one while looking for more poems of yours I haven't seen. I still love it! andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 3:38:00 PM

wow, this is really cool Was it in a contest, Nikko? and are you Pisces then? I guess that must be the sign of the gifted poet!

Date: 9/26/2009 5:08:00 PM

Interesting reflection. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 9/26/2009 4:21:00 AM

Congrats 2u on your entry poem making it through to the finals, bravo!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

Date: 7/31/2009 7:42:00 AM

As an airy Aquarian let me welcome you to Poetry Soup, Nikko. Great write you've done here! Hope you come to enjoy this site and bring lots more of your talent to our mix ... smile ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2009 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Nikko. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/25/2009 10:57:00 AM

Congrats Nikko on the featuring of "Pisces." Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poetry. Keep on posting. Ernilando

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/22/2009 7:23:00 AM

Nikko - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ