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Pirouettes and Whirls

Spellbound, she thrills to pirouettes and whirls Leaves her seat to dance in the aisle the precocious young child Shushed to sit down her bright eyes droop O, but for want of a mentor with a rainbow sherbet scoop

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Date: 4/8/2024 11:08:00 AM
aww! Too often a child’s joy is pulled out from under them. I also feel that pain. Think I’ll have a sherbert scoop! Sounds yummy and comforting! …or pour a glass of red wine…lol. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/8/2024 9:17:00 AM
A lively poem. I can picture this child's angst.
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM
awww, I felt the creative girl's spirit lessen as her eyes drooped. A special talent you desperately needs a mentor not a scolder. Well done, Gershon.
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