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Piranhas Shopping Frenzy

Shoals of frenzied greedy piranhas still hungry after the lavish feast Eyes awide on mass they stream and crowd the streets. Some have camped out all night until the morning light and the temple doors of worship open wide and people rush inside. Buying anything in site pushing and shoving grabbing snatching ending up in a fight Buying things they don't even need. So is the season of shopping and greed. 'Wonder what Jesus would think'?. Peter Dome.copyright.2013.Dec.

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

much the same as he did in the temple Peter. Well though out good pen Shadow x smile hug

Peter Dome
Date: 12/26/2013 11:35:00 AM

Hi Shadow thank you so much. yes very much as in the temple, We have gambling and the buying of gold in the local church. Anything goes these days..take care. best wishes. Pete. X.