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Pink Sunset

In these waters of warm Of the Bermuda coast I stand with my love As our bodies encroach Hips lathered Brushed by the waves Undulations discovered Impressions engraved Salty sprays Flavour our lips As a gentle breeze Between us slips The pert of she Excited by touch Her pillar of man In each other they clutch Naked as birth Two tanned souls unite Kissing, caressing In their pink sunset delight http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-7.php

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/7/2010 2:29:00 PM

Dont know how i missed this beauty ,Its speaks passion and warmth,lovely...Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/5/2010 7:46:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your magnificent and well presented poetry today James. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 6:47:00 PM

Beautiful words of luv for this upcoming holiday of luv... such a lovely painting with your words of passion and emotion... I could see the scene clearly... if its the beach... I am so there.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2010 1:43:00 PM

You paint a very romantic image of the couple on the beach, James. You do so well in expressing passion! Love you, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/4/2010 1:38:00 PM

Passionate write, James! A beautifully written poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on "The First Breath". Was astonished at your interpretation of it being about my own father who indeed has passed away. I had meant God, but your comments made me realized it could very well have been about my Dad. I still miss him. Thanks a bunch. Best wishes, Caroline.