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Pink Planet fantasy

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Pink Planet fantasy

Come 
with 
a 
smile, 
come 
with 
a 
wink
Come 
to 
the 
land 
of 
pink 
pink 
pink

Imagine 
yourself 
as 
a 
pale 
pink 
fairy
wearing 
an 
earring 
that's 
a 
pink 
clip-
on
And 
real 
pastel 
pink 
petals 
held 
in 
your 
pinkie 
pointing
to 
the 
pink 
chink 
glow 
upon 
the 
horizon 
at 
dawn.

And 
at 
times 
I 
do 
have 
such 
pinkish 
dreams
where 
everything 
is 
hued 
in 
pink 
ice-
creams
where 
I 
own 
a 
fine 
pink 
cadillac
Parked 
in 
a 
pink 
house 
festooned 
with 
pink 
lilac
That 
overlooking 
a 
pink 
sea 
ebbing 
on 
pink 
pebbles
where 
a 
pink 
moon 
against 
the 
blues
in 
a 
pink 
planet 
rebels.

In 
pink 
colors 
if 
I 
could 
customize 
'n' 
personalize 
my 
world
So 
pink 
cushions 
all 
about 
and 
pink 
curtains 
unfurled!

My 
birthdays 
always 
wish 
for 
pink 
balloons
Oh 
I 
love 
to 
decorate 
and 
celebrate
with 
pink 
and 
pink 
festoons.

And 
nature 
lovers 
could 
watch
salmon 
pink 
flamingoes
who 
stand 
upon 
one 
leg
hiding 
half 
their 
pink 
toes.
Or 
even 
bunny 
rabbit 
eyes 
in 
bright 
pink 
glows.

Ah pink's so feminine, 
think of pink hair pins
Pink lips 'neath two pink 
blush cheeks
Right above those cute 
chinny chins
or as buds in a rosebush 
take pinkish peeks

I see as well baby pink 
frocks
and frilled pink socks
and pink pom pom caps 
upon golden locks
their pink sashes behind 
them upon the walks

Ah I've always believed 
and still I think
that pinkish is girlish and 
girlish is pink. 

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM
    You're right on. Pink certainly belongs to us girls. You did this up with a big pink bow. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:51:00 PM
    ~~loving the pink thoughts from your pen. Nice win.......... SKAT~~ ..

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:40:00 AM
    WOW, the 'pinkest' poem I've ever read! Just glowing with fine imagery and verse. So enjoyable and congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:46:00 PM
    S Z K., nice winning poem...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:07:00 AM
    - Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:49:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Congrats on your win love xxx

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:09:00 PM
    looked for you Gazelle poem but it must have a different title????? Want to read it :-)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:31:00 AM
    I love the pink world you created! I could ride on your pink planet in a pink cadillac!Yes, pink is very girlish and lovely like your words. I so enjoyed!! Thanks for your nice comments on my page. :)) Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:03:00 AM
    This is an awesome poem describing such an awesome world of pink colors my dear friend SZ. This is one of my favourite colors 'cuz it is a feminine color. So love your poem and enjoyed sooo much. Thank you so much for sharing and your lovely comments on my poem. I'll come back soon to read more of your poem. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Great pink think here... You thought of everything and painted a lovely pink world. SuZ

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Yeh more power to you for thinking in pink I love this write, your awesome, me think I will wear a pink tutu for you, wink wink From now I will write with a little pink ink Much enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:09:00 AM
    Hallo. Thank you for your comment on my poem, Illuminate. It is not a coincidence that I wrote a poem using the Suzette Prime poetry form as I am the originator of this poetry form. :-)

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
    Lovely pink poem.xoxo

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 4:33:00 PM
    lovely,very girly xx

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 8:34:00 AM
    I could feel myself getting pulled in to your pink world...love the images of the pink moon on blue...so pretty...very unique style as well :) I feel that way about purple...maybe because girls were always dressed in pink and everything around me growing up was pink...