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Pink Horizon

Day sank in horizon of pink Orange, the hue that ought be shed For the old thirst I sing, enliven sorrow at the dark brink Each passage of emphasis ended beyond my black head Needless to be confined by the curve of my sooty pinata Orange, the hue that ought be shed I, no longer restrict the revelations in strata Stigma delves the latched passion which roared in fraction Needless to be confined by the curve of my sooty pinata New world offers the meadow of satisfaction Once more, I crawl into the vivid sense Stigma delves the latched passion which roars in fraction Once tedium took the throne of innocence Misled in attitude, escaped to the forest of razzle-dazzle Once more, I crawl into the vivid sense Asleep in a hush of knotty puzzle Misled in attitude, escaped to the forest of razzle-dazzle Day sank in horizon of pink For the old thirst I sing, enliven sorrow at the dark brink

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Date: 2/18/2016 12:03:00 PM
lovely poem. LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2015 8:08:00 AM
A moving piece, I see you are enjoying the form. Hugs Rick.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/8/2015 9:41:00 AM
Hey Rick, I loved to use this format, and thank you for being a good teacher in past, hahaha, I learnt it from you :p hugs back!
Date: 8/3/2015 9:34:00 PM
love this!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/8/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Jacob :)
Date: 7/6/2015 10:05:00 AM
- Dear Yanny, this is touching beautiful - a wonderful poem, from me comes a clear 7 + one fav. - Hope all is well with Ken and you (I'm not so much around the "soup" in the summer time) - Hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2015 10:36:00 AM
- My grammar is still bad :)))) - Me and my family is well :) - Sad to hear that you and Ken have felt bad, but I'm glad that it is better now :) - We have three weeks holiday now, we are at home (in Norway) ..... build a patio and paint our house :) - Here it really cold 14-18 C, not so much sun .... gray clouds and rain - Many hugs to you both !!!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/6/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Anne, this is an old poem that I ever wrote and published in poetrysoup about maybe 2 years ago, I made a huge change of it, since I used the confusing sentences before (my grammar was not as good as today, though maybe I still made some mistakes in grammar usage as well these days ) :p, thank you for your visit, and the 7+ score :) miss ya, we (me and Ken) are just recovered from coughing, how are you anne?

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