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Pink-Gold

Saved from my own cloaks of darkness; torn from grips of deceit. I lift my prayers to sun-blushed skies. The truth, I share, in shades of pink. In worship, undaunted, rouge-stained dreams turn to gold. The lies no longer bleed but melt into memories of a rosy-cheeked girl and fresh potpourri. Scattering petals of fragile carnations, I’ll live in peace hushed by pink-gold salvation. Saved by pink petals as delicate as lace. Never again, shall I fear my enemy. Cheeks blush with the love of a beautiful face, praise and devotion become the remedy. The mended heart beats in pink-hued harmony of shimmering hopes and blossoming glory. Tomorrow held in trusting adoration. In peace, I’m renewed by pink-gold salvation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
Lovingly and well written. Congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2013 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful, elegant and inspiring ...Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:49:00 PM
~~loving the pink thoughts from your pen. Nice win.......... SKAT~~
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:40:00 PM
nice win...PD
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:03:00 AM
- Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem Rhonda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:32:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Rhonda
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:27:00 PM
Very Pink. I absolutely LOVE this line: "I lift my prayers to sun-blushed skies." Lovely poem. Grats! CTB
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:31:00 PM
what a gorgeous inspirational piece....perfectly penned, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:30:00 PM
what a gorgeous inspirational piece....perfectly penned, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:18:00 PM
Oh this is beautiful, Rhonda!!
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:51:00 AM
A declaration & revelation of heart & identity. Beautiful.
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:25:00 AM
Amen! This is so uplifting.
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Date: 10/9/2013 7:36:00 AM
wowser! excellent writing and use of form a 7 and to my fav's fav line [ The mended heart beats in pink-hued harmony] and what a sophisticated use of enjambment! Light & Love
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Date: 10/9/2013 6:51:00 AM
A unique and beautiful write Rhonda, I just love how you embrace your faith. :) fitting title for this gem as well *hugs and love*
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:56:00 PM
This is really quite beautiful. You are a very talented writer dear. Best regards to you and those you love, Cindy
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:19:00 AM
Speechless ! Beautifully written , this must be in a Pink contest , well done. :0)
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:33:00 PM
this is a pretty poem and VERY unique. I don't think anyone in the world has done one on this topic of pink gold salvation. Very nice .
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:46:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! You sure have delighted me by the splendor of this glorious poem! I really loved reading this tremendous piece this afternoon! What a harmonious poem, Great Work!!
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