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Pining Island

far from the ground a sun faced sea shines on me no trouble i see but a sail with no wind to catch no worry in the air should i swim so long and tire arms and reach the golden glaze ahead on islands set down to catch a glimpse of flocking beasts and friendly herds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 10:12:00 PM
vICTORIA , congratulations in Brian's contest.. Take care and have yourself a good night ~ always* PD
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM with this beautiful poem
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement in Brian's "177" contest Victoria. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:49:00 PM
Oh, I like this very much!! Congratulations ...and yes...keep on swimming!!! (and writing)!!
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:57:00 PM
leaves one wanting more...Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:31:00 PM
Victoria congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Victoria
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