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Pine Needles Drift Down

pine needles drift down like snowflakes in a ballet ... empty birds nest falls 30/10/2011

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Date: 9/20/2012 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Russell's "Autumn Splendor" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:06:00 AM
FRANCINE Congrats with your win ~SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2012 3:20:00 PM
Nice haiku. Congratulations with the win.
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:55:00 AM
AGAIN, I LOVE it. And congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/16/2012 1:04:00 AM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL ENTRY .. ALSO THANKXX SO MUCH FOR HONORING MY POEM IN YOUR CONTEST .. AM SO HONORED TO BE RECOGNIZED AS A WINNER LUV ..
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:44:00 PM
Francine.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations Francine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:04:00 PM
wow, this is gorgeous, Francine!!
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:26:00 AM
Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 6:46:00 PM
Lovely one Francine....hope you've entered this gem!
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Date: 10/31/2011 5:08:00 PM
A perfect "strict haiku," Francine. Love the images of the needs, snow and the empty nest. Hope you entered this in Charles' haiku contest and wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Francine Roberts
Date: 10/31/2011 5:31:00 PM
its not, I have a different one entered which was entered befor I wrote this
Date: 10/31/2011 1:31:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Francine - I'm just beginning to get the hang of this form! Thanks very much -I had great fun with your contest
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