Piggie Toes

I wear very uncomfortable steel-toed boots all night long, during the daylight hours, my feet cool in the soft grass at home... I desperately need to find a nice, seated office job. For "On Your Feet" contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Written by: George Aul P.S. Please be gentle - my first Sijo.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/2/2012 8:28:00 AM

you made it, george.. get an office job, lol.. wonderful!congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/2/2012 3:27:00 AM

Good Sijo here George.Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/2/2012 2:50:00 AM

Congratulations George I feel for you x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2012 4:00:00 PM

George, I thought yours was fantastic for your first one. I loved it. Congratulations.

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/1/2012 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win George

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2012 9:40:00 AM

congrats George on a super win for an awesome write.. luv the visual here my friend...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2012 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest George. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2012 7:58:00 AM

Very well done George,good luck in the contest.- OXOX love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:49:00 PM

George, a wonderful sijo.. and office jobs.. thats the place to be..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2012 9:09:00 PM

It looks good to me. The lines can be anywhere from 14 to 16 syllables in length, and I see all three of them have 15 syllables. Your write is also very descriptive as the third line complements the first two lines.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2012 9:01:00 PM

hahaha, I LOVE it. these "foot" sijo are delightful. I hope to think of one tonight now. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 1/26/2012 6:29:00 PM

Very good 1st time attempt at Sijo,George.Enjoyed the read.Best wishs.