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Piety Variety

There was a preacher named Gunn Who kept all the ladies on the run. He caught quite a few And first thing he knew The pews were full of sons of Gunn.

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/9/2015 9:56:00 AM

Right on! Excellent! A prize limerick. On small suggestion, your choice: In the last line change "His" to "The." / M

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/10/2015 7:40:00 AM

Maurice, your words of praise have my day off to a promising start. Thank you. And thank you as well for the suggestion. I think it does improve the limerick.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/6/2015 8:28:00 PM

G'day Paul... Now this is one heck of a limerick. Well written with a very witty finale. I'll be chuckling over this for a while. Thanks Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/6/2015 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay. Your positive feedback is heartening. I'm pleased that the limerick has given you some chuckles.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2015 6:23:00 PM

ha ha ha - love it Paul:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/6/2015 8:52:00 PM

As forever and always, thanks, Jan.