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Piercing Our Hearts

Piercing Our Hearts Countries are torn apart over our children. Being physical, mental, sexual pained Wounded, broken, watching dismemberments. Their selfish taste of blood in the name of god Violence against our women and children The tide keeps growing in numbers of hatred Attracting women and children guerrillas, Who blow-up their bodies to kill innocents Allah rewards their demise in Paradise What do they see in these misguided doings? Piercing our hearts with injustice of murder We all suffer in the name of religion 2/28/2015 Syllable count: 11 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11

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Richard Nnoli

Date: 3/5/2015 2:47:00 PM

oh eve may u live for ever, tell the world i said so, so spiritual u soul here my sister, i love i love this poem richard

Eve Roper
Date: 3/5/2015 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Richard, for your inspiring complement. May God be with you blessings.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/1/2015 6:33:00 PM

It is beyond horrid that what they see is an END and the end looks better to them than the life they were given. Light & Love-Light & Love

Eve Roper
Date: 3/1/2015 8:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your response, Debbie. You are probably right their end looks better to them than the life they have been given. Debbie I took your advise on my "Menentos Gathering Dust" poem. I'm learning from your advise. Blessings dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/1/2015 12:44:00 PM

We are the pierced souls. Lord Jesus was pierced.In all ages good people are pierced. Think of Saint Joan,Galileo, Copernicus, Tycho Brahe ...list is endless.We all suffer in the name of religion...Great write Eve. God bless. Take care. Love to you and Sonny....your friend

Eve Roper
Date: 3/1/2015 8:51:00 PM

Rajat, thank you so much. Yes, there are so many that have suffered throughout the centuries and it will probably go on for many more years. Blessings dear friend

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/1/2015 12:19:00 PM

A wonderful collage of emotions, characteristic of the beautiful soul you posses. Emile.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/1/2015 8:47:00 PM

Thank you so much,Emile, for your wonderful comment . Blessings dear friend

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2015 10:38:00 AM

Well done, Eve...great take on this theme. No getting away from it...it's horrible and condemnable. No religion would condone such things. gl in the contest. // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 3/1/2015 11:58:00 AM

You are so right, Paul, no religion would condone. Thank you for your compliment. Blessings

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/1/2015 9:34:00 AM

Eve, your words certainly echo my feelings about what the world is facing today with all this torture and killing in the name of god. Yes, our hearts are pierced...well written, and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper
Date: 3/1/2015 12:03:00 PM

Sandra, we all seem to have the same emotions over all these extremely wicked acts. Thank you for your compliment. Blessings dear friend

Tim Smith

Date: 2/28/2015 7:33:00 PM

They are being brainwashed. Nice write Eve...hugs Tim

Eve Roper
Date: 2/28/2015 8:08:00 PM

So true: ( Thank you dear friend. Blessings

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/28/2015 6:51:00 PM

Excellent pen Eve! I enjoyed your very caring and beautiful piece my dear friend. Very horrible what happens around the world, lots of lost misguided people using the name of God for evil and in the wrong way. Well its been like that sadly for centuries you know that.A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! :)D."

Eve Roper
Date: 2/28/2015 8:14:00 PM

Dorian, thank you so much for your inspiring words. Yes, it has been going on since the beginning of time, I just wish it would stop. Blessings dear friend

Jan Allison

Date: 2/28/2015 6:22:00 PM

such a deep powerful write Eve - I found the imagery chilling! good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx

Eve Roper
Date: 2/28/2015 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your inspiring words. It chills me that it's evening going on. Blessings and hugs