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Pier of Eyes

Lights flood the old baywalk With male eyes, dewed sapphire Haunting as tender lyre 0n wharf’s café. The wind fondles a tune As we dine without shame To borrow night’s remains For brief affair. Though the pier thins its net, We meet in secrecy Perhaps it shouldn’t be; While eyes linger. On The Pier Contest of nette onclaud 10 of July, 2014 Carla Lalion Based on Fiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/14/2014 11:35:00 PM
This is so very beautiful Carla! Loved the mesmerising read,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:25:00 PM
Congrats for your win in the contest,well done
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Date: 7/14/2014 8:42:00 PM
OOOhh awesome :) I enjoyed this one tons!
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Carly my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:37:00 PM
Very well done, Carla. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:12:00 PM
Hi Carly, congratulations on a wonderful win! I love this romantic write! Bravo!
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Date: 7/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
i like the image of an affair's uncertainty, carly.. a solid write!... this deserves a high place in my contest.. sweet congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:59:00 AM
romantic and beautifully written Carla- a worthy winner, Hugs Jan xxx
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