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Pieces of a Letter

Pieces of A Letter Tonight is tonight that I Find out where I stand I’m nervous, shaking Trembling in my hand You kept telling me that between Us things would get better If this being the case Explain these pieces of a letter I found it on your night stand Next to your bed When I read it, it gave Me a pain in my head This guy said that with you He had a good time He made it sound sexy And tried to rhyme As I read these pieces Of a letter It hurt inside Because I knew deep down To me you had lied You made me feel alive And always charmed I have always kept you safe And secure from harm. It’s hurting me inside to think Of you and him as being a pair And the running of his Fingers through your hair When we were walking Barefoot through the sand You could have told me You had another man When you tore up the letter And left it by your bed Did you do it to play me And mess with my head? My love for you goes deeper Than the bottom of the sea Now your lies and letter Have all but destroyed me Did you plan these pieces of A letter so I could see That all your life you Wanted to be free? I guess it’s over and Nothing left to say I guess I’ll move on and Lick my wounds another day You hurt me real bad, and These tears I cannot hide But at least I know now girl How you really feel inside

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Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2012 10:15:00 AM

heartbreaking but also an oppertunity to move on knowing you gave your best. I enjoyed this heartfelt write ;) tc Wilma

Lillie Williams
Date: 12/13/2012 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Wilma. I have been away from Poetry soup for a little while, I had a lot of things going on, but now I am back and I thank you so much for your review, and your visit. Please come again.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2012 1:27:00 PM

Deep thoughts in a very well written poem - You write the basis of your heart Lillie. - Love it. - I wish you a good and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lillie Williams
Date: 12/13/2012 4:24:00 PM

Anne, thanks so much for your review. I enjoyed having you visit, so please feel free to visit any time.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2012 5:19:00 AM

this is truly a wonderful poem, yet it is of yourself, you write, you are very brave Lillie,to face up to your sad story this way, your sincerity and lovable faith really show through here.. again a wonderful poem, i wish you all the happiness you deserve, and i am sure you will find it.....

Lillie Williams
Date: 12/7/2012 4:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Harry!! I appreciate you every time you visit. You are always welcome. :-)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/5/2012 10:52:00 AM

This is very deep! All you can do is learn from this and move on. Though, its easy said than done. But try not to be too bitter to where you can't move on to the next person...enjoyed reading..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Lillie Williams
Date: 12/5/2012 12:58:00 PM

God bless you Pace. Thanks so much for visiting my work. This is good advice.. Sometimes pain cause a set back and a react to it. Hopeful with enough time,the way will seem clearer. You are welcome back anytime, so please come again.