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Pieces of a Heart

I once rebuilt a heart that broke in many pieces... I gathered them up ,and slowly connected them without any creases... Held them in my hands as some fit together with no trace ... Others needed some extra care and a soft touch to go in place... A kiss here and hug there and some tender words I shared... This fragile heart would soon be strong from another who more then cared... Now that this heart is on its own, for path I can never see... Always remember in your heart, there is still a piece of me...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Michael in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2011 12:57:00 PM

Wonderful write Michael !Congrats on your win---kashinath

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 5:19:00 AM

Such tender emotions,expressed in beautiful words.Many Congratulations Michael on your win..Liked this one..Gautami

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/16/2011 3:39:00 AM

sentimental, michael! i like the tone of this greeat piece.. congrats on the roaring win!:) huggs

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 7:07:00 PM

That is simply beautiful, Michael. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/15/2011 5:52:00 PM

Very touching poem Michael. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:43:00 PM

Congrats my Whit Knight on your great win in Frank's contest on luv and kisses and stuff.. with this excellent expressive entry my friend.. enjoy with luv.. as your words make me sing .. your Jersey Girl in luv luv mode..haha..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 4:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Racquel Grim

Date: 2/7/2011 9:18:00 AM

This is a really good poem. It's really sweet, I plan on reading a lot more of your poems Michael. Feel free to read mine and let me know what you think. Always, Racquel

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/2/2011 3:13:00 PM

Very beautifu write from a good, gentle heart. Hope all is well, Michael. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2011 10:13:00 PM

So beautiful. I miss so many poems at this place!!

Joseph Sabido

Date: 1/30/2011 8:20:00 AM

aw. . .personally love this one...reminds me of someone;c

Kay'sha Taylor

Date: 1/29/2011 2:21:00 PM

awww i loved it friend your ending line is what brung it home ,amazing write !

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:00:00 AM

Wonderful and enjoyable to read...a Big 7...Love it! Christine

James Fraser

Date: 1/29/2011 8:09:00 AM

Beautifully written from a warm loving heart, a delight to read Michael....:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/29/2011 6:31:00 AM

Your last line really brings this one home.. Another beauty filled with promise Michael.. Love from a hot CT ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2011 4:51:00 AM

Great work..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Your presence at my work delighted my soul..Sara

Sarah Comstock

Date: 1/28/2011 3:58:00 PM

I almost cried when I read this, it is my new favorite. I feel your pain. A wonderful piece Micheal. Thank you for your sweet comments-- Sarah D Comstock

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/28/2011 3:25:00 PM

Hello Michael, This is so lovely, again the tears. You inspire me. Thank you for you and for visiting me Have a wonderful Weekend. As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 2:28:00 PM

Lovely blending of creativity my White Knight.. a perfect poem of romantic elegance and tender passion and emotion ... rebuilding is a big part of life my friend.. we are flying high in the sky headed for Hawaii weekend and the Pro Bowl finally after four hour delay at airport ...soon hot sun and fun and more football luv.. Jersey Girl always thinking of u with luv..