Pieces

My heart is broken, crumbling on the floor. No words are spoken life has become a chore. Tears streaming down my face, my body begins to quake. Tired of this feeling, tired of this place, tired of the heartbreak..

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Jai Bankson

Date: 3/31/2016 12:36:00 PM

Welcome to our crazy little family,look forward to more.Nice write

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2016 8:02:00 AM

Hey Bobbi :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 7:15:00 PM

Hi Bobbi, I was wondering if you are going to post again. I'm looking forward in reading new poetry from you. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 3/27/2016 11:35:00 PM

Bobbi Jo Bentz, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 8:23:00 PM

Bobbi Jo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@