Pieces

Gathering odd bits and scattered pieces I lay on silken sheets of pristine white, a soft, lavender scent, aired, releases ... daily sorrows and fears of painful night. Rising on an astral cord, I hover all smiling at my earthly nascent self, wandering, wondering, fractals a glow we light beings uncover a unifying geometry ourselves. Do come, come and join our playful tableau.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2013 12:26:00 PM

Debbie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/14/2013 7:32:00 PM

Very pretty Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/14/2013 6:53:00 PM

Debbie, a perfect illustration of a death or near death experience, I presume! Excellent! Congratulations!

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/14/2013 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations in the contest Debbie, you wrote a very playful piece here, enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment on mine, yes too many lonely people. Take care, Regards Richard

Donna Jones

Date: 3/14/2013 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful poem Debbie, congratulations

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/14/2013 2:25:00 PM

Debbie congratulation on your fine poem. Thanks for your advice on 'What do you make of this?'. much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/14/2013 10:13:00 AM

Many congrats luv xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/14/2013 9:36:00 AM

congrats on a fine win..

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/14/2013 9:30:00 AM

Your words are never ordinary or average.......always steller and beautiful! This is no exception!

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/14/2013 9:09:00 AM

Always so eloquent, Debbie...Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2013 12:46:00 AM

I am thinking this is someone just "soul traveling" Do you believe in it, Debs? It is something that I heard some people can do and I really would love to know how to myself!! So interesting how you made lavender be the fragrance of your spirit!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2013 4:03:00 PM

DG, this is a good poem... let the light shine...PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2013 11:34:00 AM

A good poem to this contest, Debbie! - Good luck. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/9/2013 4:25:00 AM

Hi there oh cool one, like this one , I 'll think about joining your playful tableau though, xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/8/2013 10:36:00 PM

What a delightful choice of words, Debbie! :) Captivating....

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/8/2013 8:59:00 PM

This is a fabulous write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening, quite the enjoyable poem! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!! PS I will write a poem for your contest as soon as I'm sufficiently inspired, I want a good one for you!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/8/2013 7:09:00 PM

Astral flights Debs? Vistas and visits sometimes just a flight of fancy where one will "come and join our playful tableau". I'm not certain if they will vanquish those "daily sorrows and fears of painful night" but I'm sure they can give some form of reassurance and relief. Feels bitter-sweet, Debs. So wishing you the best.....Love, Mikki