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The tickets are purchased
the timing is right, 
Peace and happiness surge,
We leave at the stroke of midnight

Awaiting a fresh start,
a pleasant sense of pressure;
Opening a piece of my heart,
beginning a new adventure 

Nothing but the open road
All the pieces fall to their space,
The future is left to unfold; 
On the road to our new place

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Melanie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:28:00 PM
    What a lovely, happy poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Congratulations Melanie...great job :-)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Congratulation on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:09:00 AM
    And many blessing for you in it... congratulations Melani

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Melani the start of a new journey...David