Pieces

Pieces – Broken dreams injected into the soul of a loveless man, blown apart dejectedly Entered into Black Eyed Susan's "Pieces" contest 3/5/2013

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Date: 3/25/2013 8:46:00 PM

I like the action in this poem. I could really feel 'blown apart'. Those are hard hitting words. Good job

Date: 3/16/2013 12:34:00 PM

Russell, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

Date: 3/14/2013 7:34:00 PM

How very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Date: 3/14/2013 4:11:00 PM

Congratulations Russell...great job..

Date: 3/14/2013 2:45:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Date: 3/14/2013 2:28:00 PM

Congratulation Russell on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Date: 3/6/2013 8:08:00 PM

Wow incredible....

Date: 3/6/2013 10:11:00 AM

love this powerful write, Russell

Date: 3/6/2013 7:36:00 AM

Reads like winner to me..Maybe if true new love will come through..Enjoyed reading the line..Thanks for stopping by..Sara