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Picturesque Propinquity

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Written: February 11, 2024 ______________________________________ Features: fugacious fascinating beat I saw smoke, but no flames in sight I caught a cynosure of elusive heed Fourteen redolent rifts were recorded Oddly scripted, akin to grain ears or stalks of rhubarbs in diaphanous vibes Love came, wrapped in dulcet skin Upon palms with comely lines, ceased. A seraglio within a flesh Where a vase holds a full moon And a drape of hues: tan, blue, and gray. Pink echoes linger in the same vase As drove of doves drifting down an abyss I hit a home run with white silk rope wings And forefeel fountains flowing freely where my dreams are the hue of spring In a diamond outfit, I'll reach paradise Slowly, I caress the lavish swirl of phloxes Adopt time to hear your dizzy murmurs. Why is it love-shaped if it's not mine? You query A vast stretch of soil shrouded in mist Dawn rises from its decor of the virgin sky. My love for you remains unwavering Love is trapped on a limb, suspended in the air Whether stored with mustard or soy or fragments of an unfinished haiku The heart of love calls for a spry stir by milk-stained palms and sour cream A heart so grand, burdened by weariness. Today dawns with a pristine sky For the scenery and the stream slashing across ropes of sapphire A blend of cyan and white. I discovered this to be accurate To love is to shatter the gates of heaven Stripping a night star from its vastness Only to put it in a desolate roof garden even if it blossoms for a single night Only to perish the following dawn My shears sprang to life, ready to trim I may have loved the size of the cosmos, In a fleeting point, unguarded and sublime. Enamel strings and skeins entwined In love, everything seems ostentatious Words extravagantly rhymed, flowing lyrics Crafted in vibrant shades of captivating art.

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Date: 2/15/2024 6:12:00 AM
Lasaad my friend what a breathtaking poem - you cleverly use Lyrics and shades to compose a masterpiece. Your metaphors are exemplary and your diction chosen apt and refreshing. I love this poem and have made it s fav Hugs and blessings Jennifer Sorry I wrote a line of nonsense deleted it - I was at the hairdresser, too much loud gossip around, very distracting. Did you ever read my very first poem I posted BLONDE, ABSENT MINDED OR FAIR. i think you might have a laugh.
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:52:00 PM
This is beautiful- another testament to your very gift.
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Date: 2/14/2024 12:53:00 PM
Very flowery are these lines and verbose expressions. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/12/2024 5:40:00 PM
Your poem sings into the heavens. I enjoyed it's self-answering stanzas.
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Date: 2/12/2024 9:36:00 AM
stalks of rhubarbs in diaphanous vibes… Slowly, I caress the lavish swirl of phloxes…and so much more! You fly high, Port, in free verse!
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Date: 2/12/2024 6:22:00 AM
dear Sotto-a delightfully descriptive and soulful poem awash with exquisite imagery,amazing alliteration, and meaningful metaphors.Your level of vocabulary takes poetry to new heights which I find refreshing and challenging. I especially liked these lines:'To love is to shatter the gates of heaven stripping a night star from its vastness only to put it in a desolate roof garden even if it blossoms for a single night.' Your final verse=wow.Brilliant & creative you are! your poetess friend, Sara
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Date: 2/12/2024 6:02:00 AM
You take us there my friend--into the realms of beauty--so wonderfully described by your talented pen.--Where a vase holds a full moon And a drape of hues: tan, blue, and gray--- Today dawns with a pristine sky For the scenery and the stream slashing across ropes of sapphire A blend of cyan and white--Awesome!
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Date: 2/12/2024 3:23:00 AM
Try highlighting your poem and then listen to it read. Punctuation is important. Your poem deserves better. Otherwise, I admire your style with its alliteration, imagery and metaphors.
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Date: 2/11/2024 9:16:00 PM
"Pink echoes linger in the same vase As drove of doves drifting down an abyss" Descriptive passages as I have never seem you write before dear friend. This is amazing. What a lively style, so descriptive, and "picturesque" You have created art from words. Truly wonderful Las. Best wishes from Wen.
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