Pictures In the Skies

Cloudy skies shaping Visual viewing of vistas Picturing pictures

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Date: 9/21/2009 4:07:00 PM

Interesting use of alliteration for a rhythmic feel. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good week. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/17/2009 10:21:00 AM

sky scapes are continually evolving avery 15 minutes an altered scape.....such beauty

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/17/2009 7:14:00 AM

Beautiful haiku. Pls comment my poem-Pied Piper..thank fully.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2009 3:46:00 AM

Pretty cool James. Never thought of it that way but yeppers it is. Awesome writing. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/17/2009 3:39:00 AM

cloudy skies in Malta too,yes cloudy skies my vista..well penned Fraser- charma

Karla Null

Date: 9/16/2009 5:43:00 PM

I used to lay on the grass and let my imagination go wild with these "pictures", thanks for the nostalgia....Karla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2009 2:56:00 PM

Like the way that you worded your Haiku leaves grand opening for one's imagination. Keep writing. Sara.P.S.Soup mail soon.

Joshua Lacey

Date: 9/16/2009 2:37:00 PM

sure can be fun to look at!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/16/2009 1:01:00 PM

Nice concept James, I can picture those skies...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 12:57:00 PM

The clouds do take on shapes that remind us of special things. (Remember the photo of the dragon cloud I sent to you?) Sometimes as a child I would study the clouds and imagine stories about the forms I found in them. Excellent haiku, Highlander! Love, Carolyn