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Picture Perfect

As five am drew, the morning scene looks like a postcard. The ridges of the mountaintops are perfectly outlined as if drawn by a painter Three shades of blue layer the sky Pasted to the shades of blue sky are a half crescent moon and one very bright star The picture perfect scene ends with a warm breeze

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2016 7:41:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Maggie:-) welcome to soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:24:00 AM

Maggie Grinnell, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 1:05:00 AM

Maggie, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*