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Picture of Painted Pain

Taken this worn path ,he'd taken so many times before To his one and only true love, he will always adore His destination marked Riekers, sprinkled with fresh snow After five years even if blind, he'd know where to go Looking at the marble stone, her flowers still in his hand Made his chest ache with a heaviness, he couldn't stand His eyes teared up,then the tears streamed down his face This is where his demons lived, this was the place Today was not for them, he had something to say "Baby I'm back again! Do you remember what's today?" "It's when you gave to me a gift, one the greatest of all!" "Also when you left me, after telling me to stand tall" "Leaving me but not alone, you left with me one other life!" "Our baby girl turned five today! But still I crave my wife!" "Each day that passes, she reminds me more of you!" "Her eyes and hair, down to her dimpled smile too!" "I want to thank you for all the joy you you brought me!" "Plus our baby girl, I still bounce upon my knee!" He thought it would get easier, through the many years He placed her flowers down, unable to hold back the tears "Goodnight my love! I'll be back, but now I must go!" A cold wind seemed to kiss his cheek, as it began to blow It felt as if she caressed his face, to say "I Love You" Smiling still in tears, he whispered "Forever I Do Too!"
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Date: 12/28/2019 2:19:00 AM
Such a sad but also beautiful poem Brenda. The pain is heartbreaking but the joy so uplifiting. A mixture of so many emotions, that I myself have been experiecing over the last couple of months. A well deserved win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 12/28/2019 12:05:00 AM
WoW!! A sad love eternal story told so joyously well, Bre C. I simply adore how you meld both ends of the candle of love light. The passion and the pain painted by your talented pen is a thrill read embraceable gaze. This is pure poetry at its poignant best! Love and more love always.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/28/2019 1:58:00 AM
Rico you are far too kind my friend!;) thank you so very much!;)
Date: 12/26/2019 7:00:00 PM
Love this poem Brenda, congrats. :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/26/2019 7:01:00 PM
Thank you Gary!;)
Date: 12/26/2019 6:39:00 PM
Such a sad poem. Brought tiers to my eyes. Well written congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/26/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Michael!;)
Date: 12/26/2019 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed the poem
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/26/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thank you appreciate the visit!;)
Date: 12/26/2019 9:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Brenda. Congratulations on your great win.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/26/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 11/2/2019 3:18:00 AM
So sad I can feel the yearning. Good work Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 4:48:00 AM
Ah thank you so much so much appreciated!;)
Date: 10/31/2019 9:20:00 AM
A very tear evoking, stylish poem, Brenda. Sad remembrance of a beloved loss is often the sweetest pain. Your ink displays a peacock plume range of emotions. You are a rare bird indeed! Love and more love always.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/31/2019 12:05:00 PM
Ahh thank you Freddie you truly are too kind!;)
Date: 10/26/2019 11:50:00 PM
so sad... this one touches home...my cousin lost his wife with the birth of their daughter...it was just what would have been their wedding anniversary ...good write...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 3:41:00 AM
So sorry to hear! And thank you so much for the read and the comment Sandy! Always welcome here I love your comments!;)
Date: 10/26/2019 11:04:00 PM
Brenda, I think this poem is wonderful. I think the same of the poet that wrote it. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 11:07:00 PM
Ahh Richard thank you so much! You have made my day with your kind words!;)
Date: 10/26/2019 10:59:00 PM
Written long ago, but the pain as fresh as this moment. Haunting, chilling, and beautifully penned, my dear friend. A FAVE for me for sure. Thanks, gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 11:06:00 PM
Ahh Gershon thank you so much my friend!;)
Date: 10/26/2019 2:39:00 PM
Wow...so well written...a real tearjerker Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2019 4:31:00 PM
Thank you John I really appreciate your comment!;)

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