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I see you in a picture deep in my mind I see you holding me like a sweet valentine I see you looking with beautiful shining eyes I see you crawling all over my mind I see you, I love you, I am not blind

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2018 9:30:00 AM

- Love can make blind ... be careful my friend, Niall :) - A sweet verse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/11/2018 9:44:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you :)) lol yes love is blind but the neighbours are not ::)) just made up stuff my friend ::))Hugs~~~Niall

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2018 11:13:00 PM

Lovely verse Niall, yes they do stay firmly in your mind forever. Tom

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/11/2018 1:54:00 AM

Hi Tom , thanks for comment my friend::))) ~~Niall

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/10/2018 3:52:00 PM

This is so wonderful Niall <3

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/10/2018 4:42:00 PM

Hi Maureen , Thank you my friend glad you enjoyed my short and sweet ::)))Hugs~~Niall

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/10/2018 3:37:00 PM

hehe this is so cute :) and I love your new profile pic!

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/10/2018 4:41:00 PM

Hi Becca , thank you ;) short and sweet my friend ::)) lol did you read my ' Flattery' more than twice ;;))) Hugs~~Niall~~ps love your new hair style;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 1:59:00 PM

A lovely rhyme, Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/10/2018 2:30:00 PM

Hi Line , thank you my friend ::))) Hugs~~~Niall

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2018 12:35:00 PM

aww what a sweet rhyme Niall:-) hugs jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/10/2018 12:41:00 PM

Hi Jan , thank you , short and sweet lol ::)))Hugs ~~~~Niall